MTL - Creating a Virtual World - Chapter 483 Professional commentary

Zhou Mu finds himself remaining in a single-player VR game despite having decided to quit after platinum-ing the entire game. However, he realizes that the world has completely changed. Realizing life in the game is better, he continues on with his in-game name, William Kane.

“Why is the world united under my name? And what’s with the religion that honors me as their god? The royals are claiming to be my descendants? Was there ever such a function in the game? What have they done for the past 1000 years when I was gone?”

Zhou Mu was completely lost.

“Are you calling me a traitor? Aren’t you guys the ones who have been doing evil deeds in my name? Behold, for you shall witness this lost forbidden spell!”

A poor and bereaved medical student rescued an injured black dog from a busy road, but the black dog bit him and gave him a clinic—the Sky Clinic. If he didn’t pay the rent on time, his life would be cut short.

In order to survive, how would Ning Tao, a new cultivator, earn the good and evil value to offset the rent? What kind of bizarre and inconsistent things that were beyond his imagination would continue to happen to him? As a person between good and evil, he must keep himself balanced. How would he enhance his cultivation in the ordinary yet fantastic urban life?

This was a story of an ordinary young man who cured people while praising virtue and punishing vice.

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In his past life, as the countdown in his mind reached zero, people discovered they could enter and exit a virtual game at will. Inside, they could fight monsters and level up. Like most, Ye Qiu didn’t pay much attention to it and became a casual player, only logging in occasionally.But ten days later, the game suddenly shut down. And then, it merged with the real world!Monsters began to rampage, demons started to roam freely! Along with them came levels, equipment, skills, pets…And Ye Qiu, at the moment the server closed, was only level 5!From then on, he could only struggle to survive, hiding and fleeing, even enduring humiliation and ab*se!Until his final breath, he remained unknown, weak, and pitiful!In this life, Ye Qiu has returned to twenty years ago. And the game has just launched…

Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life.Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards.He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster “Honkai” and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works!“I will save them all!”However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise.It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines?Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée.Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him.Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him.The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises.Something was wrong here!Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others...They like him!All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists.Grayfia even betrayed her husband.Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded.At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ...His inner voice!The plot that has been changed by the MC:To Love Ru: 83%Highschool DxD: 82%Shinmai Maou no Testament: 92%Oregairu: 89%Saekano: 84%Oshi no Ko: 100%Rascal Does Not Dream Of Bunny Girl Senpai: 100%Mieruko-chan: 89%Trinity Seven: 38%This is the plot change process of the latest chapter and will change as the story progresses.By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character.Oh and in chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem.