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... ng for the mother, Ye Shuxian. This was a flaw. Additionally, An Na’s unrequited love was also a shortcoming. In fact, setting up An Na with unrequited love could still be acceptable, but the problem was that I shouldn’t have introduced Li Lixue and Dong Wan as confidantes without developing that kind of relationship. I believe, had it been so, this book might have been more outstanding.
Also, in terms of pacing, overall, I am not satisfied with how it was handled in the early stages of ...
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