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... stuff. Ughh, more deletes, deletes!
Also, I can’t quite grasp the Vice Guild Master’s personality? His character seemed oddly mish-mashed just like the broken dialogue. Will try to fix it.
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After Tristan-san collapsed, a very muscular man came over. He has the typical American style kind of ruggedly handsome look, complete with stubble and a very cut chin.
“Mukouda, is it? I am Bartolomeo, the Vice Guild ...
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