MTL - Fantasy System-Chapter 461 The nature of the novel has changed

Glanced at Yingli Pear, Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu’s disapproval said: "Her people are dedicated to dedication, doing more things and less talk, and more lines can not reflect the spirit of her selfless dedication."

"Even if she likes [Mu Fan], how does the ending become her heartfelt blessing that Mufan is over?"

Yingli pear pointed to the above person and wrote: "And, what is this appearance? The bangs of the double ponytail are too long to cover the eyes and face. You tell me what kind of fresh and refined face is this? Even if the lines are small, the face is not letting people show up? Are you too shameless?"

Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu picked up his arm and said with a light face: "In the plot of the novel, the lack of face can increase mystery. Some supporting actresses will see the light dead."

Yingli pear scorned the road: "So why don't you give such a haircut to the rain? Let her be mysterious!"

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Listening to the quarrel between the two women, Mu Fan put down the text. Although this story seems simple, it is full of many special meanings.

Moreover, with the delicate writing of Xia Zhiqiu's poetry, occasionally adding some sentences that are slightly beautiful and beautiful, it is very poetic and has the realistic color of the previous Jing Ani.

In particular, at the beginning of the mentality explosion, regardless of [Mu Fan] persuaded the psychological description of the rain, and later the rain did not listen to the invitation of Mu Fan, the kind of light novel talent that is eager to prove himself, determined to follow the expectations of readers The direction of writing will definitely be a psychological attitude to success.

In the end, when the blow was hit, the more the expectation was, the more disappointing the attitude change, and the last thing that went to save the rain, Mu Fan said, accompanied her to go with her. People can't help but tears.

Because Mu Fan is because of the help of a child, the help of a child has always been remembered in the heart, only to help the rain, and the pears for love and selflessness, have been silently loving the sail, in the end, understand the rain and the sail The love still does not say that the silent blessing of their psychology.

Transform this book from the original repression into a warm friendship story and love story.

If you use the pear pear and his understanding of the comics, and the mirror to express it, it is enough to make people inadvertently tears.

"Sister, I feel that I should at least show my face to the pear, because your book describes a passerby with a face, but the pear does not even have a face. As a female partner in the novel, it seems to be a bit mysterious." Mu Fan also agreed.

Yingli pear immediately met, and Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu: "Yeah, how do I feel that you are targeting this supporting actress, the supporting actress has no human rights!"

"Well, then let her turn into a blue-haired single ponytail."

I heard that Mu Fan said this, and the Comic Festival was just around the corner. Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu could only agree. Anyway, modifying a person’s appearance did not have much influence on the story of the book. After the three people studied it, It was started by Mu Fan and Ying Li Pear.

Because Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu has no talent for comics, she can only look at the paintings of two people, and occasionally pour water on the side of the end, to maintain the spiritual state of Mufan and Yingli Pear.

Seeing the industrious Xia Zhiqiu poetry, this can break the English pears, and take the opportunity to open the mouth and call the school sister.

"Trouble me for a cup of drink."

"I am hungry. I remember there is a supermarket near your home to buy some fries."

"Can you stand on the side of Mu Fan and stare at him, and he will bother him to paint."

Just after taking a bag of snacks from the outside, Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu heard the call of Yingli Pear, but it was a little annoyed. She stuffed a fries into her mouth, coldly saying: "I advise you to best You spend my time on drawing comics, or you can't catch up with the comics festival, I can't spare you."

Looking at Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu's biting cold face, Ying Li Pear recalled that there were only less than four days left, and he understood the urgency of time and could only begin to concentrate on painting again.

For a whole day, Mu Fan and Ying Li Pear are in the home of Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu. It takes a lot of time to study the plot and the people. If you draft the manuscript, maybe there is too much tonight, Mu Fan can only give Lily After making a phone call, she was responsible for taking care of the yarn fog and decided to stay in the home of Xia Zhiqiu Yu Yu tonight with Yingli Pear.

Mu Fan and Ying Li Pear, Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu's light novel author and artist are all long-term staying nights, and occasionally staying up late for a night is nothing.

In the evening, Mu Fan made some simple dishes. After the three people finished eating, they began to continue to code.

Just after 10 o'clock, Mufan and Yingli pear felt that the whole room seemed to be much quieter than during the day.

"Strange, what about school sister?"

The continuous silence made Mufan a bit strange. Thinking about this reason, my heart suddenly remembered the school sister who had been serving him and Yingli pear. It seems that the school sister has not appeared in them for a long time.

Mu Fan looked back in surprise, just turned around and saw the school sister who was asleep on the table, and suddenly she could not laugh.

It turned out that the school sister was too tired to sleep.

Mu Fan did not bother the school sister, but took off his coat and walked over to the schoolmate. If the normal person sleeps at night, it needs to be covered with a quilt, just like squatting on the table. When I catch a cold, I wake up to school and she probably can't sleep. It is no problem to put on a dress for her.

Seeing that Mufan left, Yingli pear went back and saw that Mufan had put on clothes for Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yu. Some of the envy of Yingli pears said: "Mu Fan, you are as gentle as the past."

Mu Fan smiled lightly: "School sister has been hit by the novel for seven days before, and has not slept well. These days, I have been considering the story of the short story. It may be because we live here that she can fall asleep with peace of mind, let She can sleep peacefully."

In fact, Mu Fan has long seen that the school sister is a little tired. After all, her dark circles are getting heavier and heavier, especially the innate beauty sister, once the face appears a little bit, you can see it at a glance.

It can be said that the school sister can fall asleep like this, and Mu Fan is relieved a lot.

When I heard Mufan’s words, Yingli pear stayed awkward and secretly said: “Although her novel has been hit, I am a little envious of her at this moment...”

This sentence is because Ying Li pear said in his heart, Mu Fan did not hear, two people are now sitting on a table, Mu Fan is on the left, Ying Li pear is facing the painting on the right.

Mu Fan and Ying Li Pear have been drawn until 1 am, because drawing comics is a laborious and brain-intensive physical activity. Even if you spend a whole night today, there is still no strength to draw tomorrow. Mu Fan and Ying Li Pear can only be at this time. Decided to rest and sleep until the beginning of tomorrow morning.

They hit a floor on the ground and didn't pay much attention to sleep. The next day, Mufan woke up and moved his body, but he felt that the body seemed to be bound by it. He opened his eyes and saw it right. Holding his own quiet face.

At this time, Yingli pear untied the double pony tail when he slept last night. A long blond hair was scattered on his shoulders, and with a soft and quiet sleep, it seemed to give a sleeping beauty, very sweet and pretty. .

I really didn't expect that English pears would have such a feminine time.

Mu Fan couldn't help but smile. When he moved down, he found that Yingli pear didn't honestly kicked the quilt when he slept last night. At this time, he was like an eight-claw octopus, holding his body tightly.

In the face of the quiet and sleepable posture of Yingli Pear at this time, Mu Fan really couldn't bear to disturb her. She could only decide to wait for her to come, lying down and watching her quietly.

But Mufan’s earning has already made Yingli pear’s mind clearer, and opened his eyes, just to see Mu Fan’s sharp and angular face, feeling that his arms and hands are holding Mu Fan’s face. famous.

"You wake up, English pear."

Seeing Yingli pear, the white face of the face climbed a touch of red, and Mufan’s face could not help but reveal a smile.

"Yep."

Yingli pear nodded shyly and then quickly pulled back her hand, but some of her devils collided in her heart. When she was asleep at home, there was a big bear in her big bed. I didn’t expect to sleep here. Sex will be a pillow.

And it happened to be seen by Mufan!

Too shameful!

But in fact, Yingli pear thinks a lot. Mufan can't detect the thoughts of Yingli pear. He stood up and said: "I just accidentally touched you and disturbed your rest. It is still early, you sleep again. Yes, I will do some breakfast, and after you have finished eating with the school sister, we will continue to work."

After seeing it, he offered to go to breakfast to leave, and Ying Li pear’s heart was warm and sweet.

Mu Fan, he is a gentle boy!