MTL - I Am Supreme-~ End of speech + report (1)

It's been over a month since I finished writing this testimonial, which is a bit late.

But there are some things that need to be explained to everyone.

At the beginning of this book, I wrote very enthusiastically.

Protecting the home and defending the country, nine respects; I am also very excited to write.

But when did it start ... I felt something was wrong.

This book, in a certain sense, is high and widow.

The tone at the beginning was set too high. Just like I argued with a few book friends one day in the chapter: You have been a soldier yourself, but we have never been. We read books to be happy, but you have to pull us together and shout slogans, we have no good feelings.

Yes, I don't believe that there are people who are not patriotic. But book friends are right, we are all patriotic, but we do n’t want to read this book and shout a slogan ... This is unpleasant.

The subscription situation also reminded me that there must be some places, the point was not selected correctly.

By that time, the entire book had taken shape.

Then I was thinking, change.

Then the website came to me and said that the contract was about to expire, but you have a lot of words.

This makes me uncomfortable.

The word count problem is a big problem.

Then I started to bury the line at the same time as the change, and buried the line of Xuanhuangjie; then I got involved with the fantasy world. Poorly, I only made the outline of the Tianxuan Continent before I opened the book; if I put more water into the dead, I can write three million ... not enough.

So the first half of the country is the world; the second half is pure rivers and lakes.

But what about this change ... I found that I made another mistake: Many readers who have been following the book are not happy: it is boiling, so why don't you upgrade and fight ...

I was aggressive for a while.

Scratching it down.

Finally, finished writing.

But the real biggest mistake is not here yet.

That's Yun Yang's identity.

It's too early to expose!

Everyone has a look, I wipe, Mo Tianji's son ... Can it still die? How could Mo Shen stick let his son die?

Therefore, the biggest suspense, and the most worrying protagonist's life and death crisis, was revealed by this identity and made no sense of crisis!

One month passed after I wrote that paragraph, I came to my senses and slapped myself seven or eight slaps: What you think, silly ...

Many readers responded to me and said: Some are boring.

This is not boring, because Mo Tianji is so awesome.

These encounters, replaced by any protagonist, are very disturbing. However, Yun Yang could not do it after revealing his identity!

Too safe!

Big mistake.

Finish with the most serious attitude; however, you can never eliminate the failure of Yunyang's identity!

This is the biggest failure of this book.

After writing, I feel pained. I can't make such low-level mistakes again in the next book.

Thank you for being with us all the way and forgiving.

I ca n’t finish the free chapter. I ’ll post it first, and then I ’ll write it.