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Really well written till the End of the Antarctis Arc. After that it fell of What a pity it had the Potential to be one of the best Ln

Dogshit ragebait novel. Every chapter has ragebait in it. "Misunderstandings" is the common loot here, every turn has it. Dropping it, was gonna endure it but Im not sacrificing my mental health on this.

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Great story plot and world building, long journey that's basically tense till last 2 chapters, but one of the best novels I've read with transmigration. Rocks!! Good sm** scenes too!

I love 😘😘😘😘 it, please 🥺 keep updating, I'll cheer for you. Love this so much, I hope this gets updated till the last chapter!!! 🙌 🎉

I love this so much please keep updating I beg of you 🥺🥺🥺
And update all of zigs other books they're a masterpiece

Loved it !!!

This is actually a good novel. First time a read this I was amazed and immediately got hooked!

Made it to chapter 24 and not sure if I want to keep reading, the plot is literally being advanced by unloyal side characters who bu** in thinking they know better then causes a huge issue,, and the Mc doesn't even say anything about the maid and the beta best friend and it's just irking me, also the world building isn't that great, like a mix of ABO and packs but no order of a pack nor respect of an Alpha really. But it's sum to rea🤷🏾‍♀️

The ending made no sense

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I'm really enjoying this story. There's acknowledgement of consent, mental health, an actual in-world explanation of transmigration... Boundaries are crossed, and consequences are doled out. The main character doesn't just forget about the life they led before, they grieve it, and demonstrate trauma from having, yno, died. That's a pretty big deal to have experienced and, while it's not pretty, it adds depth to the MC rather than shrugging their shoulders and saying "Welp, I died, now I just gotta make sure I avoid the bad ending". 

There's strategy, there's moves and counter moves that don't feel garishly predictable or shallow, and character growth from multiple parties. some characters are slower to change than others but they're moving in the right direction. 

The humour is biting and natural for English readers, presumably written originally in English which is cool. I'm really looking forward to more of the plot development and (consensual) romance scenes.

Annoying

I quite love it. The expression makes me feel unpreditable.

Have a good day

For anyone thinking they is no one reading this novel on this website u are wrong I am I hope u enjoy as much as I did  reading this novel .black crow signing out (I know it's cringe 😔)

Sensation

First problem is POV and Voice.  
Omniscient active tense is beyond weird. 
It's narrating everything as it happens.

Story better served in first person or third. 

Second explaining everything twice or more. But then changing on the fly as if author didn't remember what they just said. 

Third call MC  to test by name. After results judge asks him his name. Not after others which might distract judge, but first. 
Fourth there's no hook other than a mcguffin gold pill MC uses. 
No mention of actual parent's power, bloodlines,  or their levels and what MC inherited or his potential.  

If a first novel, editor probably had to drink to handle all the unnecessary wording.  

If pov was chosen to stand out, it failed. There's a reason for standards.

Nice story line good partner and strong family saport. I love thr mother in law character on heroines mom

Nice novel. Nice story and characters are intelligent and funny but also amusingly sly and scheming, eventually they also fall in love and carry on story. 
End is good 👍👍I recommend this to read. 
Not to short and not to long just right